diff --git a/src/ipips/ipip-0402.md b/src/ipips/ipip-0402.md index 9176ae8a9..7de1f054b 100644 --- a/src/ipips/ipip-0402.md +++ b/src/ipips/ipip-0402.md @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Terse rationale for each feature: - Trustless HTTP Clients will be able to fetch a CAR with a file, byte range, or a directory enumeration using a way lower number of HTTP requests, which - will translate to improved resouce utilization, longer battery time on + will translate to improved resource utilization, longer battery time on mobile, and lower latency due to lower number of round trips. - CAR files downloaded from HTTP Gateways will always be end-to-end verifiable. @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ Terse rationale for each feature: - [HTTP retrieval in Boost](https://boost.filecoin.io/http-retrieval) - [bifrost-gateway](https://github.com/ipfs/bifrost-gateway) -- Trustless Gateway is solidifed as the ecosystem wide standard. +- Trustless Gateway is solidified as the ecosystem wide standard. - IPIP tests added to [gateway-conformance](https://github.com/ipfs/gateway-conformance) test @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Terse rationale for each feature: - End users are empowered with primitives and tools that reduce retrieval cost, encourage self-hosting, or make validation of conformance claims of - free or comercial gateways possible. + free or commercial gateways possible. ### Compatibility @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ Due to this, gateway specification changes introduced in this IPIP clarify that: - The CAR `roots` behavior is out of scope and flags that clients MAY ignore it. - CAR determinism is not present by default, responses may differ across requests and gateways. -- Opt-in determinism is possible, but standarized signaling mechanism does not +- Opt-in determinism is possible, but standardized signaling mechanism does not exist until we have IPIP-412 or similar. ### Security @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ knows it has child entity named `index.html`, and everyone would pay a lower cos to lower number of blocks being returned in a single round-trip, instead of two. Rhea/Saturn projects requested this to be out of scope for now, but this "web" -entity scope could be added in the future, as a follow-up optimiziation IPIP. +entity scope could be added in the future, as a follow-up optimization IPIP. #### Requesting specific DAG depth @@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ Relevant tests were added to [gateway-conformance](https://github.com/ipfs/gateway-conformance) test suite in [#56](https://github.com/ipfs/gateway-conformance/pull/56) and [#85](https://github.com/ipfs/gateway-conformance/issues/85). -Detailed list of compliance checks for `dag-scope` and `entity-bytes` can be found in +A detailed list of compliance checks for `dag-scope` and `entity-bytes` can be found in [`v0.2.0/trustless_gateway_car_test.go`](https://github.com/ipfs/gateway-conformance/blob/v0.2.0/tests/trustless_gateway_car_test.go) or later. Below are CIDs, CARs, and short summary of each fixture.